Talk:Anish Raparla

Anish:

This was a very well written, concise, and effective article. You eloquently summed up exactly what was asked of you for this Wiki article and also provided relevant photos to supplement your article.

I enjoyed your introduction and how you provided a brief background of yourself in order for us to get a feel for who you are as a person so that we understand what your results might have left off. Compared to myself, it seems your results were actually a little more eye-opening, thus really interesting. I feel like your article would've benefitted from you going into the unique-ness of your name and how that might make it easier for the Google algorithm or the Databroker website to pick you out of a pool of other people.

I also enjoyed the story of you finding out about a relative that you never had. That's something you might want to expand a little more on because it was really interesting!

The way you sectioned off your article and your organization in general was really good. With a few minor tweaks and fixing a couple of grammatical errors I think this would be perfect! Good job!

-Amen Al-Moamen