Talk:Andrew Guise

Travis Spuller's Comments

Hi Mac,

I found similar success with the data brokers. I was only listed in BeenVerified, and even then so, had hardly any information about myself. This would be a great avenue to explore why there isn’t a lot of data on you. What is your internet activity like? What makes you invisible compared to a lot of the examples given by Professor Conway?

From your writing, I learned that you can download the information Facebook has of you. I didn’t know that! I’ll have to see if there is anything surprising in there. You should run with that report and compare it to the information Google has on you. Do you think Google (or any search engine) is taking the majority of the data from social media? Perhaps it’s coming from another source? After that, that should leave a great opportunity to compare the online identity you constructed yourself in Facebook (either it be a true representation of yourself or perhaps an idealized version) to the online identity given by a search engine. Do these contrast in any way?

I should also mention that your writing was very organized. The headers and the table of content fit nicely. Yet, I suggest adding some photos the compliment your writing. Also, I think you should assert some findings as your main point of the writing. Right now, I feel it is only a re-telling of an experience instead of critically analyzing the data you found.

I surely hope these comments give you aid in your revisions! Best of luck!