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Hi Alexandra,  I love your comparison to an Iceberg and how you present yourself online! I too am very much against sharing anything too personal online and found this assignment difficult because I had to expose my personal identity on my page in order to contradict what Google saw me as.  The “LeadAbroad” circumstance you described is very interesting, I’m sure they tend to get away with it because people are not willing to look into the Privacy Policy details.  Your writing style is very easy to read and your page had a really nice flow to it.  For future revisions I might move the “Privacy Concerns” sub group to the last section of the “How Well Does Google Know Me?” section in order to keep all the sub groups pertaining to search results together and then breaking down the concerns you found through these results as a sort of conclusion to the section. Overall great page I enjoyed reading it!
 
Hi Alexandra,  I love your comparison to an Iceberg and how you present yourself online! I too am very much against sharing anything too personal online and found this assignment difficult because I had to expose my personal identity on my page in order to contradict what Google saw me as.  The “LeadAbroad” circumstance you described is very interesting, I’m sure they tend to get away with it because people are not willing to look into the Privacy Policy details.  Your writing style is very easy to read and your page had a really nice flow to it.  For future revisions I might move the “Privacy Concerns” sub group to the last section of the “How Well Does Google Know Me?” section in order to keep all the sub groups pertaining to search results together and then breaking down the concerns you found through these results as a sort of conclusion to the section. Overall great page I enjoyed reading it!
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==Ethan Aziz's comment==

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Samantha Thick's comment

Hi Alexandra, I love your comparison to an Iceberg and how you present yourself online! I too am very much against sharing anything too personal online and found this assignment difficult because I had to expose my personal identity on my page in order to contradict what Google saw me as. The “LeadAbroad” circumstance you described is very interesting, I’m sure they tend to get away with it because people are not willing to look into the Privacy Policy details. Your writing style is very easy to read and your page had a really nice flow to it. For future revisions I might move the “Privacy Concerns” sub group to the last section of the “How Well Does Google Know Me?” section in order to keep all the sub groups pertaining to search results together and then breaking down the concerns you found through these results as a sort of conclusion to the section. Overall great page I enjoyed reading it!

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