Talk:Alexandra Cortez

Hi, Alexandra. You start with a strong introduction, and I'm almost immediately hooked to read more. I think you have a legitimate (for better or worse) concern regarding your name sharing with AOC, and hope it doesn't negatively affect your future. Quick fixes under "Social Media" - "...data that I had posted about previously job experience." Also under "Arrests" - it seems your last sentence was cutoff? Second paragraph of "Getting it wrong" - missing an apostrophe in "The important part of Instant Checkmate's...". Lastly in your conclusion, maybe switch "breath of relief" with "sigh of relief"?. Unless that was intentional. Side note: Being in a similar situation, I wish you the best of luck when searching for answers to your family secrets, controversies, and secret half-siblings.

- Chris Pena