Talk:Jamie Leeds

This was a very interesting post! I thought your thesis was unique and I enjoyed seeing all three of the platforms that you chose. I do think, though, that by analyzing all three, you do not go as in depth as needed sometimes. In the Facebook paragraph, for example, the last sentence says that you do not think you are your authentic self on this social media platform, but since it is only the last sentence, it seems like an after thought. You elaborate a lot more on how you have changed online than if you are authentic. Also, I think it is hard to compare all of these sites, because they are used for different things. You can be just as authentic on Twitter and Instagram, but since they have completely different styles of posts, and for you, different audiences, it is complicated to say if it is more authentic than another. I think that there should be more examples as well connecting your statements to posts on each platform in order to back up the claims you are making. I think that you should narrow down what you are trying to say (how you have changed over time, which one you are most authentic on, who your audience is, etc.) in order to back up one of these claims more specifically and with more force.