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| − | Great Wiki Andy! I was immediately drawn in by your the picture of your post and was pleased that the flow of your writing never skipped a beat. I thought that all of your screen shots of posts were well positioned and supported your online identity. I also enjoyed how you utilized your online persona to further justices in ways you felt made an impact. I wish you put more emphasis on your own experiences and personal dialogue similar to what you did in the initial paragraph rather than on the position of the LGBTQ community as a whole. Your own experiences are very gripping and more powerful for me as reader who was left wanting to read more. I also think that you could have incorporated the readings in a little more. Overall great work Andy! | + | Great Wiki Andy! I was immediately drawn in by your the picture of your post and was pleased that the flow of your writing never skipped a beat. I thought that all of your screen shots of posts were well positioned and supported your online identity. I also enjoyed how you utilized your online persona to further justices in ways you felt made an impact. I wish you put more emphasis on your own experiences and personal dialogue similar to what you did in the initial paragraph rather than on the position of the LGBTQ community as a whole. Your own experiences are very gripping and more powerful for me as reader who was left wanting to read more. I also think that you could have incorporated the readings in a little more. Overall great work Andy! -- Tyler Walker |
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Great Wiki Andy! I was immediately drawn in by your the picture of your post and was pleased that the flow of your writing never skipped a beat. I thought that all of your screen shots of posts were well positioned and supported your online identity. I also enjoyed how you utilized your online persona to further justices in ways you felt made an impact. I wish you put more emphasis on your own experiences and personal dialogue similar to what you did in the initial paragraph rather than on the position of the LGBTQ community as a whole. Your own experiences are very gripping and more powerful for me as reader who was left wanting to read more. I also think that you could have incorporated the readings in a little more. Overall great work Andy! -- Tyler Walker
