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First off, I think your style works for the content you are discussing. Your tone comes off as sarcastic and a little reserved which matches on to how you see your avatar as a witty and self-aware.
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First off, I think your style works for the content you are discussing. Your tone comes off as sarcastic and a little reserved which matches on to how you see your avatar as witty and self-aware. Furthermore, your casual style shows how natural you and your avatar represent each other. Ways to perhaps engage in the discussion of your avatar more could be to discuss inherent temporal discrepancies or perhaps problems that arise in a lack of embodiment in relation to your avatar. You discuss whether you see your avatar as an accurate portrayal, but it might add more depth to bring up how even with an accurate avatar, one can experience issues. You discuss how in the past you have perhaps addressed these issues by purging periods of your timeline due to job searching or revamping your image. It would be interesting to learn more of the specific reasons you considered when performing these purges. It can also be an interesting comparison when you consider how these issues come up in your real life, if they even do, and how you deal with them in that context.

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Hi Tom, First off, I think your style works for the content you are discussing. Your tone comes off as sarcastic and a little reserved which matches on to how you see your avatar as witty and self-aware. Furthermore, your casual style shows how natural you and your avatar represent each other. Ways to perhaps engage in the discussion of your avatar more could be to discuss inherent temporal discrepancies or perhaps problems that arise in a lack of embodiment in relation to your avatar. You discuss whether you see your avatar as an accurate portrayal, but it might add more depth to bring up how even with an accurate avatar, one can experience issues. You discuss how in the past you have perhaps addressed these issues by purging periods of your timeline due to job searching or revamping your image. It would be interesting to learn more of the specific reasons you considered when performing these purges. It can also be an interesting comparison when you consider how these issues come up in your real life, if they even do, and how you deal with them in that context.