User talk:Alvarezh

Comment #1

Hi Jose,

All in all I thought you did a fantastic job with this assignment and brought up some really interesting points around your Facebook Avatar and branding. Your introduction did a great job providing a basic outline of the rest of your paper and introducing key ideas, while also hooking me into the rest of the post. I also approached the assignment by looking over how much my activity has changed on the site over the many years I have used it, and found very similar trends, but came to a pretty different conclusion about what that more broadly was a sign of. I thought you did a very good job assessing your online persona and enjoyed how you also brought in what information you have on your personal website. The comparison between the branding that Facebook and your personal website was also very intriguing to me. Both of your main sections were very well written and then I thought you did a great job wrapping everything together in you conclusion section. Finally, I thought the illustrations and screenshots you provided throughout your post were very applicable and useful in driving home your online persona. Once again very nicely done!

Micah