Talk:Nintendo Wii

Length

The article is 942 words, which is between the 900-1,100 word requirement.

Structure

Though unformatted as of the time I'm writing this, the author has written an opening paragraph that summarizes the issue. There is also a large body with plenty of information on the topic they're covering, as well as many references. The sources all seem reliable as far as I can tell, and once formatted will make this page look very clean and professional. I would suggest that the author use some sort of scholarly citation format for their references rather than only including the links, though I'm sure they are planning to do this upon completion.
The author has made it clear that they are aware of formatting issues as of right now, so any review feels like it may be redundant, but my one recommendation would be to ensure that all headings are formatted as such so that a Table of Contents creates itself and polishes up the page as a whole.

Clarity

While it's clear what the author is talking about, I'm a bit unsure of the issue at stake as well as the ethical issues of the Nintendo Wii. Since the author and class are all only in the drafting stage, the issue has likely not made it to their page yet and is still in their notes, but this feels like an important thing to verify is on the page itself. As I mentioned, though, I'm sure this will all come together once finished.

Objective reporting (Neutral point of view)

All information stated thus far is from a neutral point of view and is only addressing things that actually took place throughout history. There is no argument from the author, and everything is objectively stated.