Talk:Nikita Badhwar

Comment from Suzanna Duba:

Hi Nikita, nice job on your profile. I liked that you talked in a personal manner about yourself, and that you used casual language. This also did't feel too long or analytical, so it was easy to read, and had a comfortable, casual voice. It felt as though you feel somewhat casually that your data identity, and the ability of one to find information on you or another, appears simply because the searched-for has at some point used the internet.

I would suggest maybe adding more details as to how you searched (which engines did you use? were you logged into a Google account?), or maybe discussing the photo to text ratio you have allowed online? These could add more analytical matter to your writing.

I also really related to your points on limiting your appearance in Facebook posts, for example photos friends tag you in, and keeping your security settings quite high, as I share the same standards. I was glad to hear I am not the only one with stricter standards.

One other thing, did you mean to use 'or' in the part "my personality of my beliefs aside from that fact..."? And in the 'Creating my online identity' section, Facebook and Pinterest should probably be capitalized to match their spellings in earlier sentences.

Daniel Joo

Overall good work! Your writing is very easy to read and flows smoothly. However, there are a few things I would like to put on the table for you to consider. The instructions given on canvas mention some points that you should touch on, including the authenticity, embodiment, and temporality of your online identity elements. I would highly recommend going more in-depth about those topics, even though you were not able to find too much about your online identity. Also, given that you could not find much about yourself online, you could spend more time tying in Floridi's ideologies that you brought up closer to the end of your post. Keep up the good work!