Talk:NBA 2k (Video Game Series)

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The length of the article meets the word count requirement; however, it is on the short side at just over 900 words. The article does include the 3 major components of a good article. There is an opening paragraph that summarizes the topic and provides relevant background information on the topic at hand. However, the section on ethical issues that NBA 2K may face is short, so to improve the opening paragraph, there should be more details and elaboration on the ethical issues at hand. The article does have numerous body sections that introduce additional relevant information and the history about what NBA 2K is. These facts are also all referenced by reliable sources. The issue at hand is somewhat clear to me; one issue is mentioned as part of the ethical issues. However, it seems that it is just one part of the main issue and it should be either elaborated more upon, or other issues should be mentioned as well. “Take-Two Lawsuit” is explained well and informative. I would suggest expanding more on the ethical issue at hand instead of writing more on the description of the lawsuit/event. In terms of objective reporting, the article is reporting objectively explaining the information upon the topic without taking a side. There are no personal opinions that are stated in the article, and all the explanations are only descriptions of the topic at hand. However, there is still much to be written about the ethical issue at hand, so this may create some writing with personal opinions and should be monitored.