Talk:Lyft

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Some suggested edit directions:

  • Add more case studies. The "In the News" section here could be further elaborated or re-organized to include more discussion of specific examples of the ways this technology has had a social + ethical impact.
  • Organization help. There are 7ish top-level sections to this article. Is there a way to organize the sections and subsections of this piece in a more comprehensive way?
  • Umbrella article? Could this and the Uber article be connected by an umbrella article? Say, on tech in the gig economy or on ridesharing as an industry? The trick would be to do it in a meaningful way, that doesn't repeat content.

Stub Edit Notes from Original Poster

I have improved my leading paragraph to mirror the article better. I have added much more to the history section of this article talking about the history behind the company as well as how it came about. I also added a section on Lyft's competitors and talked about the Chinese ridesharing company that Lyft has partnered with. Lyft's most recent lawsuit that they just settled is now in the final section of the page. Additionally, I have formatted my sources correctly and added a wider variation of sources that I used.