Talk:Keshav Gupta

Stanley Zhao Comment

Hi Keshav

I think this was a very well written piece that is easy to read and well organized. I like how you described why the data brokers have no information about you. I have the same feeling when reading your explanation because similarly the data brokers also did not pick up my information. I also think being an international student who is raised in a country other than the United States is the main reason why missing information on data brokers. It was very helpful that you included your profile page. Well done!

Nicolas Taylor Comment

Great work on the piece. You did a great job of going in depth on why the data brokers had no info on you, rather than just simply stating the fact. This worked well for the rest of the piece. Also, I liked how in depth you went in your google search section-- it helped the reader grasp the greater picture. Lastly, I think it might be beneficial if you expand on the analysis/conclusion sections. I thought the parts of the piece that were the most interesting were the ones where you explain how you feel about what your online "identity" is. Overall, great job on the piece!