Talk:Jon Ryan Hanson

I think you did a great job at addressing the background and perception aspects of your Facebook page. Your post seems sincere and well organized; I was able to follow along the way. However, I wish you had added more pictures with some comments from your Facebook page to elaborate on and identify the relationship between your digital identity and true identity.

I also agree with your comments about how Facebook users have ability to customize their profiles to fit their identity and allow them to create a clearer connection between their digital identity and their intended identity. Neglecting to do so can raise ethical issues of authenticity. We make changes to Facebook all the time and it is possible to leave out some valuable information. We may also inadvertently put something that is not a true representation of who we really are and can misrepresent our true identity.

This question aside, overall, I think you did a great job of explaining your perspectives on how your true identity is related to your Facebook persona.

Sontae

Second Review-----

Jon, your autobiography project with a focus on Facebook activity was interesting and well written. I enjoyed reading it. I like how you tell exactly how you use Facebook as almost an entirely social and light-hearted platform. I agree with your philosophy of only posting small pieces of trivia or quotes or whatever it is interesting you at that time. People who use the platform for more serious debates or who constantly are uploading unoriginal, tired content constantly tend to bog down or hide newsfeed items of actual interest.

The layout of your biography wiki is excellent. I think you used the headings and subheadings well, dividing your content into useful subsets. The one header I felt seemed out of place was the final one, "The Ethic." I think a more appropriate header could be found or the section could be expanded slightly to address your "Facebook ethics" so to speak. I also liked your three image choices and accompanying explanations for them within the meat of your paragraphs. The size of the image could be reformatted to make them slightly bigger and more aesthetically pleasing but other than that, no qualms. Good job on the project.

Ross