Talk:Jiangqiong(Joan) Liu

Drew Asselin

Great work on this assignment. Your write up was well-formatted and it's clear you did your research. I really appreciated how insightful your final paragraph is, and I wanted to see more of that! Perhaps you can incorporate that reflection and analysis in other places in your write-up. I would also further consider your point of how true the information is and how this might impact how you are perceived by others. Who is the Joan Liu people see on the internet versus who you are? Good use of readings and concepts from class, but see if you can tie them into your overall writing more. Overall, very good!

Elizabeth Whittaker

Nice job! This is clear and well-written. I agree with Drew that your final paragraph is very insightful, and I would like to see more of that here. You make use of course concepts, but don't explicitly link them to course readings much - I'd really like to see a clearer incorporation of course concepts, and I agree with Drew again that expanding your analysis into the other sections would be helpful. Overall, nice job.