Talk:ChatGPT

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Length

Your article is 1200 words which meets the 900 plus words for the draft.

Structure

Your opening paragraph does a good job of telling the reader what chatGPT is and does but I do not think it summarizes the issue. The issue is meant to be related to the ethics of information and technology. So, maybe you want to add a line just listing some ethical concerns which come about with chatGPT, in order for the reader to know what is coming their way.

Through your body paragraphs, I like how you have expanded more on chatGPT by focusing on the background which goes into it by talking about Training etc. I feel like this is essential for people who are not so well versed in IT. I do like that you have included ethical considerations in your draft as it makes me understand why you decided to write on ChatGPT.

I see that for every factual statement you were trying to bring out, you have done a good job backing it up with a reference which is excellent for a research paper. I do feel like you can expand on certain points by yourself and not just leave the point from the reference. I also do like how you used ChatGPT as a reference but I do not know how much I would use it as a reference as there is no way for me to see what you asked chatGPT to confirm your statements.

Clarity

I believe that you have to work on your introduction to give more of an overview to the reader. The ethical issues you talk about are clear and understandable to a reader and they are important because it will help a user understand the pros and cons of this piece of AI. However, I do feel that these ethical issues are for any piece of Robotics and, hence, it would be a good idea to focus on chatGPT into one area, such as education, then explain the issues.

Objective

I feel like you do a good job explaining the ethical concerns in an objective manner as you do not include personal opinions. It is also good to see that the examples you use are just to explain a controversy and not part of the words to watch. I would suggest talking about how these ethical concerns can be reduced.