Talk:Call of Duty: Black Ops 1

Length:

The article is just over 1000 words, which meets the requirements for length for the rough draft. Another 1500 words or so will be needed in order to satisfy the requirements for the final draft.

Structure:

This article succeeds in incorporating the 3 essential elements of a good article, as it has an introduction paragraph, body section(s), and statements backed up by reliable sources. You did a nice job of organizing the content of the article, by splitting your article’s body into sections and sub-sections underneath each header. I was able to follow the content and flow of the article pretty easily because of that. I also like your introduction, as it’s concise and informative.

Clarity:

I feel like the major thing that this article can improve on is clarity. There’s a few spelling mistakes throughout the article, and the article feels a bit thin in terms of content. I think that you’ve included about as much content as you would need in terms of the information about the gameplay, but I think you could easily elaborate more on the “Ethical Concerns” section. Call of Duty is a very polarizing franchise, so elaborating more on why that’s the case in an objective manner will easily help you reach the minimum word count for this article.

Objective Reporting:

You do a solid job on describing the issues surrounding this topic in an objective manner. You also present multiple perspectives for each issue, which is important when it comes to preventing any potential biases from showing in your writing. Overall, if you continue to write in this manner when expanding upon the body sections of your article, you should be in good shape.