Talk:Animal Crossing: New Horizons

Length

Exceeded the requirement of 1000 words by about 500 more words.

Structure

There is an opening paragraph that gives background information into the topic of Animal Crossing: New Horizons game with the body of the article consisting of even more insight and background into the design, goals, characters, and gameplay of the video game. After all that, there is a dedicated 'Ethical Concerns' subtopic that lists different issues related to Animal Crossing. The author discusses an example from PETA which can be found in the References section; however, I think it would be useful and beneficial to implement the link to it directly after the sentence so it is easier to find/navigate. I also think it will be beneficial to add more to the ‘bullying’ section of Ethical Concerns and maybe find a source that displays that behavior or how normalized it is within that game’s community.

Clarity

I definitely can see what the ethical issues are and how they are important to this specific game. I think it may be important to build a little bit more on it and to find some more sources that display these specific unethical behaviors which would really strengthen the argument and provide more clarity to a general audience that is not familiar with the game and how it works.

Objective Reporting

I did not see any personal opinions about the topic within the article so I believe that the author did remain objective and neutral. Once more, I think finding and implementing more references/sources would help build the argument and give more perspectives to the issue but otherwise, I still believe that the author was objective with their findings and sources so far.