Talk:Allyson Rosenzweig

Julia Pezzullo: This was really well written! It reminds me of mine, but yours is an opposite perspective. My parents actually didn't allow me to get a Facebook until high school so it was really interesting to read about your online experiences at a younger age and the different norms at that time. You incorporated class materials and concepts really nicely as well. I think there are some areas where you could dig a little deeper and maybe talk about what you specifically were posting when you were much younger and how it's changed over time. I enjoyed reading about your online experiences!

Hagan Surkamer: Ally this was a great post and I think you did the assignment well! The way you touched on the growth you have experienced in the real world and how there are trails of that growth on internet was a really cool lens to look through for this assignment. I think it made for a strong central argument that was clear through out your post. Julia made a really good comment about maybe digging deeper what exactly from this growth has stuck with you. That could be either something you wish didn't or something that you are proud of and happy that piece of history is here to stay. After reading yours, I have some great ideas about how I can improve mine so thank you!