Talk:Aaron Medacco

I liked the organization of your avatar page. Each section stays true to it's title and is well written. Your direct interaction between your images and their respective paragraphs is also done really well, for example your description of how you use likes to link your organization of favorite music.

I found your chosen theme of introversion a little difficult to clearly see in each paragraph. While the two paragraphs of Ethical Acculturation and Pictures that could lead someone to believe introversion exists (like video game marathons, and the "photos of me" part), I found the rest of the page a little unrelated to the theme. Other themes are more prelavent in your article. For example the attempt to reach an authentic profile or how facebook could be used as a bridge to move away from introversion (like how your senior year in facebook will reflects personal changes). -Miguel Abreu

Overall I found that your style of writing was very informative and did a great job of presenting the information that was important to you regarding you verses your Facebook identity. Grammatically I felt your page was easily readable. I did find one thing however, last section, 2nd paragraph, the third sentence that was had a little confusing wording, but this is probably more nit picky than anything. Furthermore I liked the organization of your page. You presented how you view your true self and you did a nice job contrasting and comparing that to your view or presentation on Facebook. Overall I think you give a very genuine effort to explain yourself, meaning who you are on Facebook and who you are really if someone were to meet you in person. I also thought you were very honest in your about section, and so your writing style and seriousness came off as very believable. -Jon R. Hanson