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Great research and use of neutral writing. Good start on sources, but try to include some citations around your game synopsis and mechanics. Make sure you're using sources that actually make the claim you are citing (e.g. your article that you cite for the game being banned isn't actually cited anywhere in your sourced article). Try looking for more diverse sources, what research has been done around violence in video games? Is this applicable to your article?