This article has potential. It's topic is value laden with ethical implications. The writing style is more essay and less wiki, so editing should focus on reducing the use of adjectives or phrases/clauses that assume agreement by the reader. In objective writing, the reader's attitudes and knowledge are not taken for granted or assumed. This issue of styling is most prevalent in the ethics section.
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There is a lot more that can be said about the ethics of fashion in terms of body language, embodied culture, norms and anti-norms, etc.