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Hi Zhongfu, this was beautifully written, especially given the fact that you couldn't found much about yourself online! You spoke about the couple of pieces of information you did find online, however I think this post could benefit from a deliberate paragraph that explicitly compares and contrasts this information with the "real" you. For example, what information online is representative of your authentic identity? What information isn't? Additionally, I think maybe you could add a conceptual question that is related to class, and tie it back to your findings to dig deeper. What is authenticity, and is your online data presence authentic since some information is withheld? Thank you for your post, and I'm looking forward to reading your edits!
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- Maya Balaji

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I am Zhongfu


Hi Zhongfu, this was beautifully written, especially given the fact that you couldn't found much about yourself online! You spoke about the couple of pieces of information you did find online, however I think this post could benefit from a deliberate paragraph that explicitly compares and contrasts this information with the "real" you. For example, what information online is representative of your authentic identity? What information isn't? Additionally, I think maybe you could add a conceptual question that is related to class, and tie it back to your findings to dig deeper. What is authenticity, and is your online data presence authentic since some information is withheld? Thank you for your post, and I'm looking forward to reading your edits! - Maya Balaji