Talk:Zhongfu Bai

Hi Zhongfu, this was beautifully written, especially given the fact that you couldn't found much about yourself online! You spoke about the couple of pieces of information you did find online, however I think this post could benefit from a deliberate paragraph that explicitly compares and contrasts this information with the "real" you. For example, what information online is representative of your authentic identity? What information isn't? Additionally, I think maybe you could add a conceptual question that is related to class, and tie it back to your findings to dig deeper. What is authenticity, and is your online data presence authentic since some information is withheld? Thank you for your post, and I'm looking forward to reading your edits! - Maya Balaji

Hi Zhongfu, I enjoyed reading your page! I thought it was really interesting that there was little information about you online, but you do a good job of explaining the reasoning behind that. I like how in your conclusion, you explain that even though it seems like you do not have a huge online presence, it does not mean that there is not hidden information about you online. One thing that might add to your discussion is talking more about how your online presence compares to the real-life you. Maybe discuss your life in China vs. your life in America and how the information found about you online is representative of that difference. - Pavitra Srinivasan

Hey Zhongfu, I loved this page. I found it intriguing how you took the angle of there not being that much information about you online. You did well with the theme you chose and the way you structure your profile. I would say that this would be even better if you perhaps did compare and contrast online presence and information here vs. in China. I believe if you dig deeper into these differences along with how it all represents the real you, it would make for a great profile. Overall, this was very well done! I look forward to your edits. -Olajide Jegede