Talk:Zhen Lian

Arif Jamaluddin's Comment

Hey Zhe,

Your entry was very engaging and kept me interested throughout the whole essay. I think you did a great job at trying to identify the real you. I liked how you used different search queries to find different results. An area I think you could improve is making a more clear thesis/mission. In the introduction is sounded like you already knew the outcome of what happened, maybe just put in the intro a sentence of what you hoped to learn about yourself. Overall really enjoyed this entry!

Alex Wang's Comment

Hi Zhen,

I enjoyed reading your data identity statement. I particularly liked how you talked about your data identity as a representation of your