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Your entry was very engaging and kept me interested throughout the whole essay. I think you did a great job at trying to identify the real you. I liked how you used different search queries to find different results. An area I think you could improve is making a more clear thesis/mission. In the introduction is sounded like you already knew the outcome of what happened, maybe just put in the intro a sentence of what you hoped to learn about yourself. Overall really enjoyed this entry! | Your entry was very engaging and kept me interested throughout the whole essay. I think you did a great job at trying to identify the real you. I liked how you used different search queries to find different results. An area I think you could improve is making a more clear thesis/mission. In the introduction is sounded like you already knew the outcome of what happened, maybe just put in the intro a sentence of what you hoped to learn about yourself. Overall really enjoyed this entry! | ||
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| + | I enjoyed reading your data identity statement. I particularly liked how you talked about your data identity as a representation of how social media is | ||
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Arif Jamaluddin's Comment
Hey Zhe,
Your entry was very engaging and kept me interested throughout the whole essay. I think you did a great job at trying to identify the real you. I liked how you used different search queries to find different results. An area I think you could improve is making a more clear thesis/mission. In the introduction is sounded like you already knew the outcome of what happened, maybe just put in the intro a sentence of what you hoped to learn about yourself. Overall really enjoyed this entry!
Alex Wang's Comment
Hi Zhen,
I enjoyed reading your data identity statement. I particularly liked how you talked about your data identity as a representation of how social media is
