Talk:Yuki Fang

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Comment from Clair Peng Hi Yuki, overall I like the structure of your post, especially you add Google Image as a part of searching results. For the Transparency Speculation part, I like the point that you mentioned employers’ cannot use the data broker’s report to do background checks for employees but people can use it to send gifts to friends. However, what I suggested is you can develop more under the data privacy, such as do you think that information online can truly demonstrate who you are, or what is it right about you and what it does not mention but it is actually very important for you? I think there are some spaces that you can develop more.


Alexandra Cortez

I really appreciated your use of headings/hierarchies and visuals in you page. I think an overview or introduction at the top would have been nice to give an idea of where you're coming from before conducting the research on yourself. For the Google Search section, I think it would be nice to understand why you were so surprised that your coding projects were so prominent. Do you not associate this with a big part of your identity? What kinds of information were you expecting to find instead of this? Under what this means, you suddenly start saying "our" which you hadn't referred to before. I would try to keep this about you or general Internet users. Also maybe go into more detail about how your online presence might be interpreting by employers. Would it be an accurate picture?

Zhongfu Bai's Comment

Hi Yuki, thanks for sharing with us what you've found about your own information on the internet and the data brokers. I like the part you tell us how you use google to research your online data identity and how you explain the reasons that there's no much about your personal life. I also think is good to conclude that though there's no much real information about yourself online, but you still stay careful of what the internet can do with your information in the future.

Logan Niswander

Overall I really enjoyed your data identity statement. As a fellow CS major, I found your discussion of your online professional image to be particularly interesting. The fact that so much of your professional work is available online is surprising, especially considering how well you seem to have hidden your personal life. The images you chose to use were also excellent and related well to your writing. I think one area you could improve on is in your discussion of what it really means for your professional work to be available online. Perhaps you could talk more about how it makes you feel knowing employers are able to look at those projects whenever they want. You could maybe even go into a longer discussion about privacy in professional life vs personal life and whether there are differences which exist between the two.