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Hi Yuki, overall I like the structure of your post, especially you add Google Image as a part of searching results. For the Transparency Speculation part, I like the point that you mentioned employers’ cannot use the data broker’s report to do background checks for employees but people can use it to send gifts to friends. However, what I suggested is you can develop more under the data privacy, such as do you think that information online can truly demonstrate who you are, or what is it right about you and what it does not mention but it is actually very important for you? I think there are some spaces that you can develop more. | Hi Yuki, overall I like the structure of your post, especially you add Google Image as a part of searching results. For the Transparency Speculation part, I like the point that you mentioned employers’ cannot use the data broker’s report to do background checks for employees but people can use it to send gifts to friends. However, what I suggested is you can develop more under the data privacy, such as do you think that information online can truly demonstrate who you are, or what is it right about you and what it does not mention but it is actually very important for you? I think there are some spaces that you can develop more. | ||
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| + | I really appreciated your use of headings/hierarchies and visuals in you page. I think an overview or introduction at the top would have been nice to give an idea of where you're coming from before conducting the research on yourself. For the Google Search section, I think it would be nice to understand why you were so surprised that your coding projects were so prominent. Do you not associate this with a big part of your identity? What kinds of information were you expecting to find instead of this? Under what this means, you suddenly start saying "our" which you hadn't referred to before. I would try to keep this about you or general Internet users. Also maybe go into more detail about how your online presence might be interpreting by employers. Would it be an accurate picture? | ||
Revision as of 20:56, 19 February 2020
Comment from Clair Peng Hi Yuki, overall I like the structure of your post, especially you add Google Image as a part of searching results. For the Transparency Speculation part, I like the point that you mentioned employers’ cannot use the data broker’s report to do background checks for employees but people can use it to send gifts to friends. However, what I suggested is you can develop more under the data privacy, such as do you think that information online can truly demonstrate who you are, or what is it right about you and what it does not mention but it is actually very important for you? I think there are some spaces that you can develop more.
Alexandra Cortez
I really appreciated your use of headings/hierarchies and visuals in you page. I think an overview or introduction at the top would have been nice to give an idea of where you're coming from before conducting the research on yourself. For the Google Search section, I think it would be nice to understand why you were so surprised that your coding projects were so prominent. Do you not associate this with a big part of your identity? What kinds of information were you expecting to find instead of this? Under what this means, you suddenly start saying "our" which you hadn't referred to before. I would try to keep this about you or general Internet users. Also maybe go into more detail about how your online presence might be interpreting by employers. Would it be an accurate picture?
