Talk:Vikram Vennapusa

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Hi Vikram,

Great job on your avatar. One of the things that stood out to me the most was how you styled your writing. I like how you wrote your avatar as if it was an internal dialogue. As I read, I felt like I was going through and analyzing your profile page along with you. The “real-time” feel was very unique and added a creative element to your writing. I can definitely relate to your “2014-Present” section and how your current profile is mainly comprised of secondary elements. I think it was an appropriate way to end your writing before wrapping it all up in the conclusion, but I wish you added more to it. I wish you added more “why”—like why you no longer have an interest in keeping up with Facebook’s new features or why you no longer prefer to use your Facebook to entertain others. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your avatar and appreciate the effort and honesty that went into it!

-Sam

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