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| − | I think what you found is really interesting and reveals some troubling things about the tactics used by Facebook to prey on people who just skim through things before just accepting them(I'm pretty guilty of that). I think the relation to the readings could have been more embedded with your own experiences as currently, it feels like in the intro a couple of readings are mentioned and then you talk about your own experiences when I think it might flow better if you mention the readings in relation to your own experiences. Otherwise, I think this was good | + | I think what you found is really interesting and reveals some troubling things about the tactics used by Facebook to prey on people who just skim through things before just accepting them(I'm pretty guilty of that). I think the relation to the readings could have been more embedded with your own experiences as currently, it feels like in the intro a couple of readings are mentioned and then you talk about your own experiences when I think it might flow better if you mention the readings in relation to your own experiences. Also, I think that the section when you talk about your own experiences could have been broken down into multiple sections so it feels more organized. Otherwise, I think this was good! |
Revision as of 21:59, 19 February 2019
Jesse Kim
I think what you found is really interesting and reveals some troubling things about the tactics used by Facebook to prey on people who just skim through things before just accepting them(I'm pretty guilty of that). I think the relation to the readings could have been more embedded with your own experiences as currently, it feels like in the intro a couple of readings are mentioned and then you talk about your own experiences when I think it might flow better if you mention the readings in relation to your own experiences. Also, I think that the section when you talk about your own experiences could have been broken down into multiple sections so it feels more organized. Otherwise, I think this was good!
