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| + | == Winter 2017 Comments == | ||
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| + | * The lead here has some clunky writing. Could someone clean this up? | ||
| + | * There's a lot written under ethical implications here, but not a lot using the analytical framework from our readings. | ||
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| + | == Previous Year Comments == | ||
This is a well structured article, well enough written for a first draft. Technically good. The references need work to turn them into citations. The ethical implications parts are thin. But this is an important topic with many complex ethical implications that are only hinted at in this first draft, particularly since some of the cited references themselves dig deeply into the ethics of dating apps generally. | This is a well structured article, well enough written for a first draft. Technically good. The references need work to turn them into citations. The ethical implications parts are thin. But this is an important topic with many complex ethical implications that are only hinted at in this first draft, particularly since some of the cited references themselves dig deeply into the ethics of dating apps generally. | ||
Lots of room for deepening the discussion. | Lots of room for deepening the discussion. | ||
Latest revision as of 15:05, 17 April 2017
Winter 2017 Comments
- The lead here has some clunky writing. Could someone clean this up?
- There's a lot written under ethical implications here, but not a lot using the analytical framework from our readings.
Previous Year Comments
This is a well structured article, well enough written for a first draft. Technically good. The references need work to turn them into citations. The ethical implications parts are thin. But this is an important topic with many complex ethical implications that are only hinted at in this first draft, particularly since some of the cited references themselves dig deeply into the ethics of dating apps generally.
Lots of room for deepening the discussion.
