Talk:Tianshuo Yan

Comments from Brant Verlinde

Hi Tianshuo! I found it very interesting to hear about the discrepancies between Google and Baidu as I have only ever been exposed to Google. You bring up a great point about how the algorithms behind each of these platforms could influence which information appears first, like good or bad news about a celebrity. I really like the organization and structure of your article as well, the headers and subheadings made it very clear what was being discussed, and the flow between them was easy to follow. If I had to suggest an improvement, I think adding a little more to the “Google” and “Present Usage” sections would be useful. In your current draft they only include a sentence or two, and I think they would be great additions if they had a little more in them. Great job!