Difference between revisions of "Talk:The Amy Boyer Case"
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*In your section of "Documenting the Murderer", I think that this could a great and a really interesting section of how the Internet was used to do all of this. I would be interested in knowing if anyone else knew about this website, if anyone read it, or how was it written, in a blog style with pictures or what? | *In your section of "Documenting the Murderer", I think that this could a great and a really interesting section of how the Internet was used to do all of this. I would be interested in knowing if anyone else knew about this website, if anyone read it, or how was it written, in a blog style with pictures or what? | ||
| + | *When you start relating this all back to ethics, it is confusing what you mean by moral barriers because you don't really relate the moral barriers back to the actions of the murderer, it is hard to follow and could use much more information. Your point is made a little clearer in the very next section, but it should be explained earlier. | ||
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One thing I don't understand is why there is no wikipedia page for either Amy Boyer or Liam Yuens. Is there some sort of legal or moral reason? tjcortez
I was wondering about that too. After that lecture I went google Amy Boyer, hoping to find a wiki article, and was really surprised there wasn't one. Victor
I was surprised there wasn't one either - in fact, I don't even think there is a wikipedia page for the specific murder either. I do know that it wasn't really nationally/mass broadcasted (at least I don't think), so perhaps that is also a reason? Jennifer
Comments
- I would combine your Amy Boyer section with your 1st paragraph since the Amy Boyer section is short.
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- I would add much more substantial information about Amy Boyer, I would like to know more about her!
- The sentence where you describe that Youens finds himself unattractive is a bit random because you don't really delve into the deeper psychological meaning behind this or the impact of low his self-image.
- In your section of "Documenting the Murderer", I think that this could a great and a really interesting section of how the Internet was used to do all of this. I would be interested in knowing if anyone else knew about this website, if anyone read it, or how was it written, in a blog style with pictures or what?
- When you start relating this all back to ethics, it is confusing what you mean by moral barriers because you don't really relate the moral barriers back to the actions of the murderer, it is hard to follow and could use much more information. Your point is made a little clearer in the very next section, but it should be explained earlier.
