Talk:Taylor Jones

Jesse Kim

I think this is a really good start! Other than the obvious things like fixing the pictures so they show up, I think you did a really good job of incorporating the readings so that they flow with your own experiences and it feels a statement backed by a fact from the reading. I think you brought a good point about how if you don't share much at all online, the data points that can be used to construct your identity cause a large disconnect between the person you are today and the "person" that exists online. You talk a lot about you don't have any social media accounts except for Facebook and I think it might be interesting if possible to compare how much information is out there for someone who does have many social media accounts versus someone like yourself who seldom uses social media. Also might be interesting to comment on whether in this current information age where online presence is definitely becoming a part of our identities it is better to have that privacy and maybe have a distorted online identity or share your information and have your online identity be an accurate representation of your self at the loss of some aspects of privacy.