Talk:Taylor Denby

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Comment by Kelsey Toporski:

Hi Taylor,

Great post! I thought it was really interesting especially because you have such a prominent aspect of your life that your search results could be centered on even thought it’s from a long time ago now. I thought it was interesting that you went a few pages deep into your search results - I hadn’t really thought about doing that as I usually never look past the first page of results.

It seemed like a lot of your analysis was focused on what data was current and what was outdated, and so I’d maybe suggest some reformatting to highlight that a little more. I think your “Other Results” section could potentially be broken down a little more as well, maybe into two sections - one focused on social media and one that remained as “other” - just so it flows a little better while reading. I think it might also be neat to see a picture of the actress person from England with your name! Overall nice job.