Talk:Taran Deshpande

Hi Taran,

Great first draft! I thought your research and analysis were thorough, I especially liked how you used Google, and then used DuckDuckGo in Tor to compare the difference that cookies and location have on your data identity. It was fascinating to me to see that your global data identity was much weaker than your local data identity, however this could also be a side effect of Google's superior indexing and search engine ranking algorithms. Your data identity statement was well written and I thought you did a great job with your formatting and organization. Your writing was relatively free of typos, I was only able to find a few minor mistakes. I thought your main point that your data identity is largely controllable by you was strong and provided a good insight into the idea of online anonymity and the ability to control your online privacy. Your evidence supported your main idea well, as Instant Checkmate was not able to provide more specific results than your Google search.

-Harrison Crandall

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