Talk:Steven Wang

Hey Steven, your post is structured well and it’s a very clean and easy to read format. I find it interesting that you, like pretty much everyone else started your online presence with only wanting a higher number of likes/friends/followers but found yourself becoming more conscious about who you added and what people were able to see. I think that says a lot about who you are and how you perceive social media and privacy.

One thing I would include is your view of the “online you” versus the ”physical you”. The assignment asks us to talk about the ethical relationship between these two versions of us and I think it would help your post if you could elaborate on how you perceive your online identity relative to your physical identity. Whether you think the two are both correct, or only a small piece of your real identity, or maybe one of them is just a public facing identity that is completely different from the real you. Either way, I think some more conceptual writing about the ethics of the online vs offline identities would beef up your conclusion to really round out a good post.

-Hayden Macfarlane