Talk:Soumya Tejam

Comment by Patrick Tse: Hi Soumya! I really enjoyed reading your Wiki page! I really liked the use of bold words when you wanted the statement you were making to stand out. My favorite one is when you said "my online identity isn't created by me, it is created for me." I feel like that statement really epitomizes the point of this assignment. Another part I liked was the section on the different types of identities. It was great that you made that distinction because one's data identity may be part of the whole identity, but not the whole thing.

The only thing that I would recommend you revise is the lack of capitalization on some words. For companies like Facebook and Instagram, their names should definitely be capitalized.

Comment by Santiago Perez:

Hello Soumya! Your data identity statement was very nicely written. I did stumble on a couple words, but a quick search put me right back on track! I am a big fan of using and learning new words and expanding my vocabulary and after reading your statement I can say that I have definitely achieved that. I like how you get straight to the point with your findings and analysis and I am glad to hear that for the most part, you describe your data identity as satisfactory. I think that it is a very wise choice to be cautious of what you post online and you have confirmed this. The "deducing data" portion was my favorite part because when I started reading the "absolute identity" part I was nodding my head in agreement the whole time. It's so wack that what you are the most proud of does not even show up. Your analysis in the "anchored identity" portion was elegantly stated and I loved how you used the time capsule analogy because that is totally what it is, put in a clever way! To me, this is a perfect paper.