Talk:Soumya Tejam

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Comment by Patrick Tse: Hi Soumya! I really enjoyed reading your Wiki page! I really liked the use of bold words when you wanted the statement you were making to stand out. My favorite one is when you said "my online identity isn't created by me, it is created for me." I feel like that statement really epitomizes the point of this assignment. Another part I liked was the section on the different types of identities. It was great that you made that distinction because one's data identity may be part of the whole identity, but not the whole thing.

The only thing that I would recommend you revise is the lack of capitalization on some words. For companies like Facebook and Instagram, their names should definitely be capitalized.