Talk:Sontae Ma

The organization of your page is very good. There are a few grammer things throughout the page but for the most part it is well written. One critique I would say however is to go more in depth about your personality traits. You do a good job of diving into things you like to do and your jobs, but this is more about what you do than who you are I think. However some people say you are what you do but I think talking more about your personality traits would help be more insightful. Another thing that I like about your page is that you talk about the limitations of Facebook. I think you could expand more on this by going into what aspects about you are unable to be portrayed due to these limitations. I still think you did a nice job of talking about how Facebook does and does not embody who you really are virtually versus not virtually. Overall I think you gave a genuinely serious effort in your discussion of your Facebook identity, but one thing I would suggest would be to further talk about what aspects you find important about yourself do not get portrayed by Facebook. I hope this helps a little bit!

-Jon R. Hanson