Talk:Sharanya Jayendraprasad

Hi Sharanya,

On a micro level, you have a few grammar errors as well as spelling errors. Your picture links are also broken.I like the portion of your essay in "Too Much Too Toxic" where you focused on your specific audience and how it has changed. I feel that you can flush it out a bit more by just going more in-depth. I find your perspective on audience interesting. You don't necessarily have to keep having your audience increase rather monitor what you want each social media platform to stand for. You can flesh out those ideas a bit more.

Hi Sharanya, I think you took a good approach to this. I echo the comment above that photos are broken. Additionally, I think it is interesting how you say "The frequency of my content generation has decreased, and I much rather prefer posting pictures when an occasion calls for it, or snap my day to day activities to a specific group of friends. I am also notorious for tagging friends in memes, videos, and GIFs on Facebook and Instagram." However, I wished you had explored this concept much more throughout your piece. I think just more development and asking yourself why you chose to do certain actions throughout your piece could fill it out and develop it more, giving more character and depth overall. I hope you have good luck on your edits! -Madeline Nowicki