Talk:Sharanya Jayendraprasad
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Hi Sharanya,
On a micro level, you have a few grammar errors as well as spelling errors. Your picture links are also broken.I like the portion of your essay in "Too Much Too Toxic" where you focused on your specific audience and how it has changed. I feel that you can flush it out a bit more by just going more in-depth. I find your perspective on audience interesting. You don't necessarily have to keep having your audience increase rather monitor what you want each social media platform to stand for. You can flesh out those ideas a bit more.
