Talk:Sean Getty

Conner Applebee

Hi Sean

I loved your article overall, very well written. I loved the part about how your name is involved with other people and organizations, I too have that problem and I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one. I found it strange in my data broker report that my local Applebees was listed as a secondary address, and I was wondering if you had any strange things like this in yours, I plan on adding this information in my revisions. I also really liked how you broke the pieces of your search apart and I think it would be interesting to have a comparison section. Just some things to think about.

Meelan Patel

Hi, I enjoyed reading about your data identity! You did a good job analyzing the information online that was not about you. To improve, i think you should explain what that "one link" was and what impressions that digital link gives off about you, even if it was your LinkedIn. Potentially discuss what kind of impression the lack of information about you online gives off about you when compared to your real self. You should also add some images to your wiki; possibly an image of your google image searches. Furthermore, add details from the readings to dive into; possibly discuss how these data profiles affect us. There was some grammatical errors but your logical flow and style was good. Good Luck!