Talk:Sean Fortney

Comment from Catherine Grillo: Hi Sean – I enjoyed reading your wiki page! First, I really liked the organization of your piece, I like that the social media section was split up into different platforms. This made the article readable and gave the reader a preview of what you will be talking about. I also liked your analysis of how accurate your online identity is. I thought your points were insightful and interesting. I especially liked your discussion as to why you think Facebook has the most accurate information on you. I had never thought that your online identity might become more accurate through the posts of other people, so I thought this was a very clever way for you to frame this analysis. One thing I might suggest is diving deeper into why you think the data broker information was inaccurate or incomplete. I think this could be interesting to explore, and you could even try sifting through their privacy statements to see if it gives any clues as to where the information is coming from. Additionally, I think it could be useful to maybe explain why you did or did not use incognito mode in Google. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your page and I thought your analysis was insightful and well-written!