Talk:Sam Lu
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Comment by Kelsey Toporski:
Hi Sam,
I thought you did a great job! I was entertained, which I did not expect from this type of article. I like how you talked about the different outcomes of Sam vs. Samantha online and how those tie back to your personality in real life as well. I thought you hooked the reader well in the beginning, and kept it entertaining throughout.
On the formatting side, I thought your sections were well thought out and unique, but I’d suggest throwing another space in between paragraphs just so it’s a little easier to go from paragraph to paragraph. The space wiki provides is small enough that it makes it look like one big paragraph to the reader.
Overall I thought it was genuinely great!