Difference between revisions of "Talk:Sam Lu"
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| − | I thought you did a great job! I was entertained, which I did not expect from this type of article. I like how you talked about the different outcomes of Sam vs. Samantha online and how those tie back to your personality in real life as well. I thought you hooked the reader well in the beginning, and kept it entertaining throughout. | + | I thought you did a great job! I was entertained, which I did not expect from this type of article. I like how you talked about the different outcomes of Sam vs. Samantha online and how those tie back to your personality in real life as well. I thought you hooked the reader well in the beginning, and kept it entertaining throughout. I also thoroughly enjoyed your analysis of your past and present social media use, I think first and foremost because I can relate to them so well. I, too, was an annoying 14 year old on Facebook. |
On the formatting side, I thought your sections were well thought out and unique, but I’d suggest throwing another space in between paragraphs just so it’s a little easier to go from paragraph to paragraph. The space wiki provides is small enough that it makes it look like one big paragraph to the reader. | On the formatting side, I thought your sections were well thought out and unique, but I’d suggest throwing another space in between paragraphs just so it’s a little easier to go from paragraph to paragraph. The space wiki provides is small enough that it makes it look like one big paragraph to the reader. | ||
Overall I thought it was genuinely great! | Overall I thought it was genuinely great! | ||
Revision as of 00:11, 19 February 2020
Comment by Kelsey Toporski:
Hi Sam,
I thought you did a great job! I was entertained, which I did not expect from this type of article. I like how you talked about the different outcomes of Sam vs. Samantha online and how those tie back to your personality in real life as well. I thought you hooked the reader well in the beginning, and kept it entertaining throughout. I also thoroughly enjoyed your analysis of your past and present social media use, I think first and foremost because I can relate to them so well. I, too, was an annoying 14 year old on Facebook.
On the formatting side, I thought your sections were well thought out and unique, but I’d suggest throwing another space in between paragraphs just so it’s a little easier to go from paragraph to paragraph. The space wiki provides is small enough that it makes it look like one big paragraph to the reader.
Overall I thought it was genuinely great!
