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Hey Ritam! I thought your autobiography was extremely candid and insightful. I liked how you showed how your statuses changed over time and tied that back to your personality as well. The quality of writing was also really good throughout this piece and it was entertaining as well- I found myself laughing a few times. From your autobiography, I was able to get a better idea of why your Facebook is constructed the way it is, however, I think there is also room to elaborate on some other factors. For example, you state how alot of the content on your profile is "manufactured" and maybe going into this some more would be really interesting. Additionally, adding some more information about your audience and how that shapes the content you share would also be a good point of elaboration. You introduce a lot of great points and overall, this was a really enjoyable read and I definitely felt as though you were being genuine in your attempt to write this autobiography. Thanks for sharing this information with us!

-Rishika

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