Talk:Reeya Shah

I enjoyed reading your page! The structure flows nicely as you break down each aspect of your Facebook profile page. You did a nice job explaining and analyzing the facets of the Facebook profile and how you use them or have used them in the past. I agree with the statement that "My online identity has progressed from someone who was not herself to an accurate representation of who I am today." I feel that I can relate to this and I think it would be awesome if you went more in-depth on this subject. In my opinion, I feel that the piece lacked an overall theme of your identity. You stated in the conclusion that you prefer to keep your activity to a minimum for the most part, which is a great point but it seems to be introduced briefly. You could introduce it in the beginning or another theme you feel is relevant, and try to tie that in throughout the piece. Overall nice job!

-Shane Levine