Difference between revisions of "Talk:Reeya Shah"
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I enjoyed reading your page! The structure flows nicely as you break down each aspect of your Facebook profile page. You did a nice job explaining and analyzing the facets of the Facebook profile and how you use them or have used them in the past. I agree with the statement that "My online identity has progressed from someone who was not herself to an accurate representation of who I am today." I feel that I can relate to this and I think it would be awesome if you went more in-depth on this subject. In my opinion, I feel that the piece lacked an overall theme of your identity. You stated in the conclusion that you prefer to keep your activity to a minimum for the most part, which is a great point but it seems to be introduced briefly. You could introduce it in the beginning or another theme you feel is relevant, and try to tie that in throughout the piece. Overall nice job! | I enjoyed reading your page! The structure flows nicely as you break down each aspect of your Facebook profile page. You did a nice job explaining and analyzing the facets of the Facebook profile and how you use them or have used them in the past. I agree with the statement that "My online identity has progressed from someone who was not herself to an accurate representation of who I am today." I feel that I can relate to this and I think it would be awesome if you went more in-depth on this subject. In my opinion, I feel that the piece lacked an overall theme of your identity. You stated in the conclusion that you prefer to keep your activity to a minimum for the most part, which is a great point but it seems to be introduced briefly. You could introduce it in the beginning or another theme you feel is relevant, and try to tie that in throughout the piece. Overall nice job! | ||
| − | + | ==Ben Tan== | |
| + | What I didn't like: | ||
| + | I found it a bit odd that you posit that your online identity is a true representation of who you are offline, but in your closing paragraph you state that you intentionally limit your online content compared to what actually transpires in your physical world. I would like to see you defend the authenticity of your virtual identity, perhaps justifying your privacy with an approach based on the ethics of voyeurism and personal security. | ||
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| + | What I loved: | ||
| + | I love the way you structured facebook into its functions and proceeded to relate each function to your offline social interactions. It's a great way to frame your virtual identity and I think it's an approach that has a lot of practical value. The analysis you draw comparing the virtual and physical world provides for an easy yet informative read and I enjoyed perusing your thoughts. | ||
Revision as of 20:38, 21 February 2018
Shane Levine
I enjoyed reading your page! The structure flows nicely as you break down each aspect of your Facebook profile page. You did a nice job explaining and analyzing the facets of the Facebook profile and how you use them or have used them in the past. I agree with the statement that "My online identity has progressed from someone who was not herself to an accurate representation of who I am today." I feel that I can relate to this and I think it would be awesome if you went more in-depth on this subject. In my opinion, I feel that the piece lacked an overall theme of your identity. You stated in the conclusion that you prefer to keep your activity to a minimum for the most part, which is a great point but it seems to be introduced briefly. You could introduce it in the beginning or another theme you feel is relevant, and try to tie that in throughout the piece. Overall nice job!
Ben Tan
What I didn't like: I found it a bit odd that you posit that your online identity is a true representation of who you are offline, but in your closing paragraph you state that you intentionally limit your online content compared to what actually transpires in your physical world. I would like to see you defend the authenticity of your virtual identity, perhaps justifying your privacy with an approach based on the ethics of voyeurism and personal security.
What I loved: I love the way you structured facebook into its functions and proceeded to relate each function to your offline social interactions. It's a great way to frame your virtual identity and I think it's an approach that has a lot of practical value. The analysis you draw comparing the virtual and physical world provides for an easy yet informative read and I enjoyed perusing your thoughts.
