Difference between revisions of "Talk:Rahil Patel"
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Hi Rahil! You did a good job on writing your personal data identity statement. I can see your time and effort in doing research about yourself. It is good that you tried different methods and it is interesting that you noticed some differences between your three matches. Your information about the University of Michigan is not shown well but the LinkedIn profile appears in the search result. It is good to protect privacy. If I had to point out some improvements, I would say that you can talk more about the deep reason that is behind the phenomenon. It would be great if you add more content about your own thoughts and feelings and also analyze why the results are like that and try to generalize your idea to a broader concept. I would also suggest you to use a website called CheckMate, which allows you to find your identity more thoroughly. | Hi Rahil! You did a good job on writing your personal data identity statement. I can see your time and effort in doing research about yourself. It is good that you tried different methods and it is interesting that you noticed some differences between your three matches. Your information about the University of Michigan is not shown well but the LinkedIn profile appears in the search result. It is good to protect privacy. If I had to point out some improvements, I would say that you can talk more about the deep reason that is behind the phenomenon. It would be great if you add more content about your own thoughts and feelings and also analyze why the results are like that and try to generalize your idea to a broader concept. I would also suggest you to use a website called CheckMate, which allows you to find your identity more thoroughly. | ||
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| + | Hello Rahil! I really enjoyed reading your data identity statement. It was very interesting how you discovered parts of yourself on the internet. I liked the distinction you made between what you see online and what is actually true. I liked how you illustrated and organized the key points from your online searches into the michigan and golf categories. It is definitely interesting how your highschool golf achievements were easier to find than your college experience. Maybe you should go into why that is and come up with an explanation. I think you could talk about how your linkedin identity and how that relates to your actual identity. I also suggest using a background searcher such as Check mate. Overall I really enjoyed the wikimedia post, it was very insightful how the internet portrays individuals. | ||
Latest revision as of 19:15, 27 February 2021
Morgan Tucker Comment
Hey Rahil! I enjoyed reading your insightful reflections on your searches and who the internet portrays you to be. I like how the reader can see you changing your mindset from "don't believe everything you see online" and you can believe it but understand there are missing pieces. You also made a good point that, though your Linkedin can tell someone about your work experience and interests, it is simply what you want people to know about you "on paper". On one hand, it is nice that you can curate what people know about you, but to truly know someone, one must meet face to face. Something that may be beneficial would be considering the order you discuss your search results. You could have your piece on social media first because that is more general, and then get into your specific searches. Just some things to consider, but not crucial changes. Overall, great investigations and reflections. - Morgan Tucker
Zhiyuan Sun Comment
Hi Rahil! You did a good job on writing your personal data identity statement. I can see your time and effort in doing research about yourself. It is good that you tried different methods and it is interesting that you noticed some differences between your three matches. Your information about the University of Michigan is not shown well but the LinkedIn profile appears in the search result. It is good to protect privacy. If I had to point out some improvements, I would say that you can talk more about the deep reason that is behind the phenomenon. It would be great if you add more content about your own thoughts and feelings and also analyze why the results are like that and try to generalize your idea to a broader concept. I would also suggest you to use a website called CheckMate, which allows you to find your identity more thoroughly.
Shi Ya Wong Comment
Hello Rahil! I really enjoyed reading your data identity statement. It was very interesting how you discovered parts of yourself on the internet. I liked the distinction you made between what you see online and what is actually true. I liked how you illustrated and organized the key points from your online searches into the michigan and golf categories. It is definitely interesting how your highschool golf achievements were easier to find than your college experience. Maybe you should go into why that is and come up with an explanation. I think you could talk about how your linkedin identity and how that relates to your actual identity. I also suggest using a background searcher such as Check mate. Overall I really enjoyed the wikimedia post, it was very insightful how the internet portrays individuals.
